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Massacre
We come bursting through your bodies, rape your helpless soul.
Transform into a creature merciless and cold.
We force you to kill your brother, eat his blood and brain.
Shredding flesh, sucking bone, till everyone’s insane.
We are the savage virus that infects your heart and mind.
Slay and slaughtering till there’s nothing left to find.
We torture your almighty god, force him to become you enemy.
Leaving him with bitterness, hatred and insanity.
We disappear into the darkness just as quickly as we came.
Sending your soul to hell with impurity and shame.
Transform into a creature merciless and cold.
We force you to kill your brother, eat his blood and brain.
Shredding flesh, sucking bone, till everyone’s insane.
We are the savage virus that infects your heart and mind.
Slay and slaughtering till there’s nothing left to find.
We torture your almighty god, force him to become you enemy.
Leaving him with bitterness, hatred and insanity.
We disappear into the darkness just as quickly as we came.
Sending your soul to hell with impurity and shame.
Published 29th Aug 2009
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29th Aug 2009 9:02pm
Scary IS hell. Good Grief....
the structure and rhyme are perfect.
The content....well, i am watchful.
the structure and rhyme are perfect.
The content....well, i am watchful.
30th Aug 2009 7:48am
I know poems don't HAVE to rhyme but I am always a fan of people who have the artistic flair and genius to carve a poem which sounds right, touches a nerve and rhymes too. Well done!
1st Sep 2009 9:25am
This poem makes me think of an involuntery possession of demons. Like the power of Hell has overcome the protection of God. Any human is exposed.
"We torture your almighty god, force him to become you enemy.
Leaving him with bitterness, hatred and insanity."
These lines help explain my point. The overcoming of Hell. A power found to gain each and every soul. Even of the almighty. A very scary thought.
But I love your dark poetry the best :)
"We torture your almighty god, force him to become you enemy.
Leaving him with bitterness, hatred and insanity."
These lines help explain my point. The overcoming of Hell. A power found to gain each and every soul. Even of the almighty. A very scary thought.
But I love your dark poetry the best :)
30th Sep 2009 9:45pm
Although this poem is short, it lacks nothing. The discriptiveness is excellent. It's horriffic and powerful. Visually the "invasion" comes, overtaking everything, then leaves just as quickly as it came. Your poem is the same way: a fast start, the action, and you are left. I love the feeling you're left with; empty and spent.
25th Feb 2011 10:00pm
