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My Little Whine
I had overc0me the m0n0t0nous m0lding of
primary scho0l. The brandinizati0n of high sch0ol!
I have seen the era of humanity in its m0st rancid
and grotesc form. I hav survived the z0mbificati0n techniques of vasity and al0ng my voyge through the greedy claws of society gained m0re true knowledge and self worth then the greatest phil0s0phers.
And my reward for such anguish and pain?
I get to work until im mentaly 0r physicaly
indiquate to do so. . .
We are but a pawn in the World of an Idol God.
Until the time realisati0n shall dawn
That it is our own hand that cracks the Rod.
primary scho0l. The brandinizati0n of high sch0ol!
I have seen the era of humanity in its m0st rancid
and grotesc form. I hav survived the z0mbificati0n techniques of vasity and al0ng my voyge through the greedy claws of society gained m0re true knowledge and self worth then the greatest phil0s0phers.
And my reward for such anguish and pain?
I get to work until im mentaly 0r physicaly
indiquate to do so. . .
We are but a pawn in the World of an Idol God.
Until the time realisati0n shall dawn
That it is our own hand that cracks the Rod.
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Re: My Little Whine
1st Nov 2012 9:55am
that was ace I feel the same as you. you are not alone.
stay punk
marcus
stay punk
marcus
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re: Re: My Little Whine
1st Nov 2012 3:23pm
alas! Im n0t al0ne!!
Thank you .
And punk? Is that a c0mm0n phrase you use or do i seem punk? It would be a 1st for me if its the latter as ive never been stereotyped before. . .
Anyways keep on penning master pieces for me to féast upon.
Kavitha. . .
Thank you .
And punk? Is that a c0mm0n phrase you use or do i seem punk? It would be a 1st for me if its the latter as ive never been stereotyped before. . .
Anyways keep on penning master pieces for me to féast upon.
Kavitha. . .
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1st Nov 2012 4:59pm
lol i do seem to say that a lot just before the end of a performace i say "stay punk" some people get it i love the confusion it means say what you want to say and dont let the bastards get you down... or somthing like that lol
cheers
marcus
cheers
marcus
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1st Nov 2012 8:32pm
i see.
Hahahaha sorry i tend to be to analytical at times mind me prying as to what sort of a preformer you are?
Hahahaha sorry i tend to be to analytical at times mind me prying as to what sort of a preformer you are?
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2nd Nov 2012 9:52pm
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2nd Nov 2012 10:05pm
hahahahaha... I just did but n0n the less i will ask once m0re.
What sort of a performer are u?
What sort of a performer are u?
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2nd Nov 2012 11:02pm
lol well guess its all subjective but its more comedy based its more of the funny stuff as oposed to the dark stuff, though i do that to i use props like the darth vader mask for the darth vader poem and other props depending on what im moaning about.
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3rd Nov 2012 6:04am
impressive.
The furtherest ive been in dictating my w0rk is when i read it out to the walls of my empty home. . .
The furtherest ive been in dictating my w0rk is when i read it out to the walls of my empty home. . .
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3rd Nov 2012 9:08am
cool we all started there is there any bars or pubs who do open mic nights in your area? or even recors some and post on here.
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4th Nov 2012 6:43am
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4th Nov 2012 9:59am
You should how do you know unless you try? my first time i was nervous but it went down well. just be unique and be yourself.
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