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Ending her sorrow
A chair against the door
An empty bottle on the floor
Who is that girl on the bed
With her wrist bleeding red
She has no tomorrow
She is ending her sorrow
Her sight blurs black and gray
Her world fades away
An empty bottle on the floor
Who is that girl on the bed
With her wrist bleeding red
She has no tomorrow
She is ending her sorrow
Her sight blurs black and gray
Her world fades away
Published 27th Oct 2012
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Anonymous
27th Oct 2012 10:01pm
depressing. good expression of how she feels. nicely written.
27th Oct 2012 10:03pm
27th Oct 2012 11:49pm
Severe depression is always accompanied by a pervasive sense of suffering as well as the belief that escape from it is hopeless.
My heart breaks to know that for many, this is their way out, or so they think.
Thank you for sharing! Very well written! xo
My heart breaks to know that for many, this is their way out, or so they think.
Thank you for sharing! Very well written! xo
29th Oct 2012 1:43am
This is really good ! This is one of the best i've seen on her. I'm really into rhyme with emotion ! Thank you for sharing
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2nd Nov 2012 2:20pm
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3rd Nov 2012 8:12am
Written so simplistic.. Yet extremely powerful, leaves one impressionable (emotions wise) from it. Amazing job.
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23rd Nov 2013 6:41pm
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27th Apr 2014 11:28am
your stuffs pretty dark,just read your profile, so understandable.we all have our shit to deal with but probably no where near as much as you.didnt want to leave the page without saying something,just keep going, after all that things just gotta improve, got you in my prayers,peace and love
28th Apr 2014 10:34pm
Thank you friend. Like you said we all have out demons, some more than others but that doesn't mean mine are worse than anyone else's. Demons are demons and we are all fighting the same battle. Thank you for your kind words.
Much love,
Hannah
Much love,
Hannah
