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mister master
Ram into me.
Pay no mind to my scraped knees.
Don't be gentle keep it rough.
My pussy's tight
But you are tough.
Biting.
Slapping.
Sucking.
Fucking.
I'm your puppet.
Be my master.
Pull my hair
And pound it faster.
Harder.
Louder.
Bigger.
Wetter.
Now release a to make it better.
Over the edge now,
Here we go.
Time to remove that damn blindfold.
Beat it baby
Keep it steady
It's ok my mouth is ready
Pulsing
Cumming
Dripping
Gulping
Oh the swallowing after the choking
My body beat and bruising
I have to thank you,
My mister master
For giving me a taste
Of your disaster.
Pay no mind to my scraped knees.
Don't be gentle keep it rough.
My pussy's tight
But you are tough.
Biting.
Slapping.
Sucking.
Fucking.
I'm your puppet.
Be my master.
Pull my hair
And pound it faster.
Harder.
Louder.
Bigger.
Wetter.
Now release a to make it better.
Over the edge now,
Here we go.
Time to remove that damn blindfold.
Beat it baby
Keep it steady
It's ok my mouth is ready
Pulsing
Cumming
Dripping
Gulping
Oh the swallowing after the choking
My body beat and bruising
I have to thank you,
My mister master
For giving me a taste
Of your disaster.
Published 19th Oct 2012
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19th Oct 2012 2:29am
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19th Oct 2012 5:14pm
I've never been much into this sort of relationship. However, your writing about it does make me wonder . . . maybe?
At any rate, well written with an excellent visual image.
At any rate, well written with an excellent visual image.
19th Oct 2012 5:48pm
Lol I make myself wonder at times too! Sounds wonderful to feel like that at least once! Lol
19th Oct 2012 9:06pm
Once, lightly done, to try it out. Maybe. I'm not sure how I would be at hurting someone, even a willing someone, in the heat of lust (certainly not love?).
21st Oct 2012 1:24pm
I enjoyed your poem.
Having been a poet now for a decade and always wanting to improve my craft...I took your text and worked it over a bit. I like poems that have verses, regular rhythm, etc. Here is my modification to your original. A few changes and a few modifications...let me know what you think.
mister master
Lunabella
Ram me.
Slam me.
Jam me.
Wham me.
Don't be gentle,
Keep it rough.
My pussy's tight,
But you are tough.
Biting.
Sucking.
Slapping.
Fucking.
I'm your puppet.
You're my master.
Pull my strings,
Then pound me faster.
Harder.
Longer.
Hotter.
Stronger.
Padded handcuffs,
A pink blindfold -
I'm all yours,
To have and hold.
Pinch it.
Clinch it.
Winch it.
Flinch it.
Deep throat thrusts.
Yea...keep 'em steady.
It's O.K.
My mouth is ready.
Pulsing
Cumming
Swallowing
Gulping
Painful pleasures!
Beloved bruising!
I submit, Sir,
To your using.
I kneel and thank thee,
Mister Master,
For this sweet taste
Of your disaster.
Having been a poet now for a decade and always wanting to improve my craft...I took your text and worked it over a bit. I like poems that have verses, regular rhythm, etc. Here is my modification to your original. A few changes and a few modifications...let me know what you think.
mister master
Lunabella
Ram me.
Slam me.
Jam me.
Wham me.
Don't be gentle,
Keep it rough.
My pussy's tight,
But you are tough.
Biting.
Sucking.
Slapping.
Fucking.
I'm your puppet.
You're my master.
Pull my strings,
Then pound me faster.
Harder.
Longer.
Hotter.
Stronger.
Padded handcuffs,
A pink blindfold -
I'm all yours,
To have and hold.
Pinch it.
Clinch it.
Winch it.
Flinch it.
Deep throat thrusts.
Yea...keep 'em steady.
It's O.K.
My mouth is ready.
Pulsing
Cumming
Swallowing
Gulping
Painful pleasures!
Beloved bruising!
I submit, Sir,
To your using.
I kneel and thank thee,
Mister Master,
For this sweet taste
Of your disaster.
21st Oct 2012 4:40pm
