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18th Oct 2012 8:29pm
I have to say you are very good at these short poems. I would like to see this one longer, but there is a lot to chew on if you give yourself time to really think it over. I saw in it a sense of isolation, a distance from the rest of the group. Like I said there is a lot to look at here, even if it is confined to a small space.
18th Oct 2012 9:13pm
Jeremy is right. you are very good at these short poems. You've said quite a lot in the one sentence.
