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godblessAmerika/CorpoPharmaceuitica
byDaKozak[witPixtr]MoO
cto1520126:53pm ·
(OR:it'sjustyr-own-damn-faul
tsomehowgotta be)
g' oddBless o'godoggy
blissed be
( o'fucka mio! ) if
it were'nt for thees goodmedicines,
goodmedicines be,
eye'd have them big,scary lookin knives
me buddy Richie give me, in each hand one in
each
handy'ass hand, sla'sla,slashiin
my
d i s easy s'elf to a fckn skinless
p'p'p'pulp
(& The Juice that flies'd be
a muchdarker s h a d e
of o'range)
ah, she was my love, She/wee said silly
forever-shit o'countless
times as wee laughed in love,
she
was a doctor, she saved saved me body's heart
from certain ceasing in that grand
millenia year, turned 'me'
a miracle,
then, l e ft , d e parted,
ten(10)yrs ago nexmonth,
af 'lyin' into
her own (solitary)
"..madding crowd's
ignoble strife....."
& thee Rest is just Medicine.....
my('o'My)
medicine.........give
it
to
me now, for'ever
(would it were
some one
'else' would
show any such
semblance
of Mercy
now)
xxxxxxxdkzk2012octoxxxxxxxxxx
cto1520126:53pm ·
(OR:it'sjustyr-own-damn-faul
tsomehowgotta be)
g' oddBless o'godoggy
blissed be
( o'fucka mio! ) if
it were'nt for thees goodmedicines,
goodmedicines be,
eye'd have them big,scary lookin knives
me buddy Richie give me, in each hand one in
each
handy'ass hand, sla'sla,slashiin
my
d i s easy s'elf to a fckn skinless
p'p'p'pulp
(& The Juice that flies'd be
a muchdarker s h a d e
of o'range)
ah, she was my love, She/wee said silly
forever-shit o'countless
times as wee laughed in love,
she
was a doctor, she saved saved me body's heart
from certain ceasing in that grand
millenia year, turned 'me'
a miracle,
then, l e ft , d e parted,
ten(10)yrs ago nexmonth,
af 'lyin' into
her own (solitary)
"..madding crowd's
ignoble strife....."
& thee Rest is just Medicine.....
my('o'My)
medicine.........give
it
to
me now, for'ever
(would it were
some one
'else' would
show any such
semblance
of Mercy
now)
xxxxxxxdkzk2012octoxxxxxxxxxx
Published 16th Oct 2012
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18th Oct 2012 3:59am
I like this because its confusing, yet I see what you're trying to say I think.
thank ye, dear....don'worry'bout 'confusing'. Wee all read words differently, & brain processes 'em differently...which means most people are not gonna 'relate' to these words i put out either here on DUP or anywhere. I 'have to' write spontaneously & let whatever comes out stand as-it-came-out - no editing, no tryin to contrive to 'change' it to please the crowd...spontaneous improvisation scares most people & most artists. It's too risky. Too naked. Too vulnerable.For that-which-is-left-of-Me, spontaneous improvisation, wit my words, wit my music, wit my imagery, is what i have to strive for....so it goes.....of the 57 who 'read' this, y're the onliest responder...g'oddbless ye for doin so.
31st Oct 2012 5:25pm
good evening.
there are so many fuckin cool things bout this poem, the layout, the jittery style and the fact that it scares me, i can form loads of crazy ass pictures in my minds eye that i couldnt properly describe here. your also very brave in your writing, not writing for others and just slammin down lines as they come. i look forward to reading more in the future!
x
there are so many fuckin cool things bout this poem, the layout, the jittery style and the fact that it scares me, i can form loads of crazy ass pictures in my minds eye that i couldnt properly describe here. your also very brave in your writing, not writing for others and just slammin down lines as they come. i look forward to reading more in the future!
x
31st Oct 2012 5:37pm
g'aweDamn, Biff.....thank-you+ mil grazie gracias muchos
&well'come to DUP......
well, just here on dup is near 400 of 'my' rarely commented upon missives for ye t'get lost in.
see ye 'round
&write-on, kid write on
&well'come to DUP......
well, just here on dup is near 400 of 'my' rarely commented upon missives for ye t'get lost in.
see ye 'round
&write-on, kid write on
1st Nov 2012 6:57pm
hey man thanks for the warm welcome, while i dont write for other people i demand my own stuff is damn near perfect, your idea of just pissing it out, as it were, inspired me to give it a go.
ill send u the results.
x
ill send u the results.
x
2nd Nov 2012 00:58am
yr welcome &thank you as well---
doesn't hurt to try sumthin different
doesn't hurt to try sumthin different
