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Waves
White knuckled determination kicks in
Breathing out ghosts of air
Until they dissipate into nothing
Like my hopes of smiles and laughter
Dissipate into the sound of screams and pleads
How dare they stand up
While I crumble into the realm of hellish fires
Throwing myself into them
Yet I am never scarred
The cruel injustice infuriates me
It is time
Time to fall into Lucifer's embrace
Suddenly the waves are upon me
Breathing out ghosts of air
Until they dissipate into nothing
Like my hopes of smiles and laughter
Dissipate into the sound of screams and pleads
How dare they stand up
While I crumble into the realm of hellish fires
Throwing myself into them
Yet I am never scarred
The cruel injustice infuriates me
It is time
Time to fall into Lucifer's embrace
Suddenly the waves are upon me
Published 12th Oct 2012
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12th Oct 2012 5:18pm
a LOT of emotion riding these words. Love the visual and auditory elements that jump out as they're read. good write!
12th Oct 2012 5:34pm
12th Oct 2012 9:56pm
This is very well written! I love how you say about crumbling into the realm hellish fires. It's very interesting! Good job!
12th Oct 2012 10:04pm
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10th Nov 2012 8:43pm
Anonymous
2nd Apr 2013 2:43pm
Oh shit " Lucifer's embrace"
It feels you gave up a fight and fell into the hands of evil
..that's the msg I interpreted.... if its wrong sorry.
This made my heart crumble. What an affect!!!
It feels you gave up a fight and fell into the hands of evil
..that's the msg I interpreted.... if its wrong sorry.
This made my heart crumble. What an affect!!!
2nd Apr 2013 2:59pm
No, no, you're right!
This is a throw back into the past,
I can hardly remember writing this :)
This is a throw back into the past,
I can hardly remember writing this :)
Anonymous
2nd Apr 2013 3:05pm
Yeah its what I normally do when I follow a poet I read their first poem ( well in DUP ). If you can't remember then....who wrote this beautiful piece....lol.
2nd Apr 2013 3:14pm
I usually read their first and then their
most recent, to see if they've improved/
been consistent :)
most recent, to see if they've improved/
been consistent :)
18th Apr 2013 00:46am
26th Jul 2013 7:22pm
fantastic,
going back even a year, you shine
awesome to see how much your work has grown
and yet
how even then
you still had "it"
=]
going back even a year, you shine
awesome to see how much your work has grown
and yet
how even then
you still had "it"
=]
