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So unknown
Human life
in this world
is a flame of candle
softly flickering
in the sweet wind of love
so divine and unknown
mysteriously blowing
through two darknesses
the one before birth
the other after death
in this world
is a flame of candle
softly flickering
in the sweet wind of love
so divine and unknown
mysteriously blowing
through two darknesses
the one before birth
the other after death
Published 10th Oct 2012
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Anonymous
10th Oct 2012 6:56pm
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10th Oct 2012 8:47pm
24th Mar 2013 8:29am
Such a stunning poem,
I love the simplicity
of the words, and the
depth that they carry.
in the sweet wind of love
so divine and unknown
mysteriously blowing
through two darknesses
Very well written.
I love the simplicity
of the words, and the
depth that they carry.
in the sweet wind of love
so divine and unknown
mysteriously blowing
through two darknesses
Very well written.
