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I don't like you
I don't like you
there really is no reason why
you just seem to dance around with your head held high like a black angel
but you're fake and It sickens me
the shit you say
the games you play
I see through it
there are so many ways I could let you know how much I despise you
but I've decided to take the high road and be nice and just simply say
I really do not like you
there really is no reason why
you just seem to dance around with your head held high like a black angel
but you're fake and It sickens me
the shit you say
the games you play
I see through it
there are so many ways I could let you know how much I despise you
but I've decided to take the high road and be nice and just simply say
I really do not like you
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Re: I don't like you
8th Oct 2012 9:52pm
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8th Oct 2012 9:59pm
Yeah I'm not feeling it much. I am going to keep fixing it up :-) thank you love xoxo
Re: I don't like you
8th Oct 2012 10:03pm
Why is this so hard to say? It's like a death sentence. It seems so final, and yet we have to have boundaries. Cutting the social cord.....
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re: Re: I don't like you
With no boundaries I'd say much more. So that is why I think we need them . It is hard to say but easy to write xoxox turtle
Re: I don't like you
9th Oct 2012 12:46pm
Re: I don't like you
9th Oct 2012 5:25pm
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9th Oct 2012 5:38pm
Re: I don't like you
9th Oct 2012 7:53pm
Reading this I thought of the person that I just don't like. I have never told her but she makes me sick. It is my sister in law, hehehehe
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re: Re: I don't like you
10th Oct 2012 00:18am
Re: I don't like you
Anonymous
10th Oct 2012 4:42pm
GiGi, girl, I must admit how much I do love your rawness when constructing a poem. I definitely feel this one!
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