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fun with writersblock
been a while since I've written anything
no inspiration
so we wait
fingers crossed
eyes closed
sitting in lotus position
waiting
hoping for either the big one to hit
and take us all down
or some interesting words
so I can gain some amount of
appreciation from my peers
come cult followers
let us shake the world off its axis
forcing the inevitable early
or get her to show me her tits
so I have something to write about
no inspiration
so we wait
fingers crossed
eyes closed
sitting in lotus position
waiting
hoping for either the big one to hit
and take us all down
or some interesting words
so I can gain some amount of
appreciation from my peers
come cult followers
let us shake the world off its axis
forcing the inevitable early
or get her to show me her tits
so I have something to write about
Published 12th May 2010
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Anonymous
13th May 2010 2:04am
I like the seeming comparison of death to a woman who won't show her tits, and the image of the narrator surrounded by his potential cult followers. Another brief but effective glimpse inside the dark basements of the human spirit.
13th May 2010 3:52am
my dark basements have mildew who the fuck is gonna clean up in hear god damn theres dust all over the books and mold on the art work.. and its all just in my head :D
13th May 2010 4:20am
13th May 2010 9:28am
Anonymous
14th May 2010 4:18am
mildew creeping everywhere, I can relate to that very well,the sudden mention of 'her tits' startles, I loved that bit,and the need to feel alive is so strongly conveyed in this one, love it nathan.
14th May 2010 11:53am
if you can't feel "alive" while living what's the fucking point in staying righright? :D glad you dig it hunny
