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My Old Man
It's raining
It's pouring
My old man isn't snoring
He fell out of bed
When i shot his head
He wont be up in the morning
It's pouring
My old man isn't snoring
He fell out of bed
When i shot his head
He wont be up in the morning
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Re: My Old Man
5th Oct 2012 5:04am
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5th Oct 2012 5:30am
He's "so sorry" and just "wants to be part of his daughters life" ugh! Just his voice makes me homicidal. Glad you liked it though:) I wrote one about him crashing his truck into a tree lol, I might post it tomorrow.
Re: My Old Man
5th Oct 2012 5:52am
haha. I'd love to read your truck in the tree poem. was he your biological father?
My father always said he was "so sorry". I make it a point never to accept the apology of a drunk, lying, hypocrit who likes to rape children. Wait till he wants to be a part of your child's life. You can never trust him.
My father always said he was "so sorry". I make it a point never to accept the apology of a drunk, lying, hypocrit who likes to rape children. Wait till he wants to be a part of your child's life. You can never trust him.
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re: Re: My Old Man
5th Oct 2012 6:00am
Yes he was my bio father. Oh don't worry, I'll never forgive him. As soon as I turn 18 he'll never hear from me again. And as far as my kids go, I'd kill him before he ever got close.
I just edited the poem. I'll PM it to you so you can be the first to read it before I post it tomorrow!(:
I just edited the poem. I'll PM it to you so you can be the first to read it before I post it tomorrow!(:
re: re: Re: My Old Man
5th Oct 2012 8:10pm
The bastard. Mine was my biological father too. I'd love to read the edited version.
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Re: My Old Man
5th Oct 2012 6:19am
I can't believe you ever have to hear his voice again...you do have some say in that correct?
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5th Oct 2012 1:16pm
Sadly no. Because I didn't tell anyone til I was 14 CPS dropped the case. So technically he still can come get me if he wants. My mom makes sure that doesn't happen though. But he still comes over to our house to see my younger sister. (I look like my mom, my sister looks like him. She's always been his favorite, he's never laid a finger on her.)
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5th Oct 2012 6:24pm
Well, that fucking sucks and the system has failed too many times. Very unfortunate and you are amazingly beautiful and strong. There are good things ahead for you, don't let the rough start deter you.
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5th Oct 2012 8:15pm
My sister and I tried to get my father in trouble for it too. But there was a law stating that you only had so many years to tell on him, from the date you remembered what happened. Because I had always remembered, they told I had went past the time allowable to get him in trouble.
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