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SOME COUPLES
Some couples, the night they acknowledge they're lovers,
Will take off their clothes and dive under the covers,
While others whose passions are running hotter-red
Will not wait, but will make love ON TOP of the bed,
While others still go, where they did not go before,
In cars, tents, shady woods, long grass or on the floor.
Whether starting over, or "losing their cherry",
I believe a couple's first time should be merry!
Will take off their clothes and dive under the covers,
While others whose passions are running hotter-red
Will not wait, but will make love ON TOP of the bed,
While others still go, where they did not go before,
In cars, tents, shady woods, long grass or on the floor.
Whether starting over, or "losing their cherry",
I believe a couple's first time should be merry!
Published 4th Oct 2012
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1st Oct 2013 6:22am
14th Feb 2020 6:49am
I think it's merry anywhere as long as it does not offend in a public place and not rape. Kudos for a sassy fantastic poem.
Pls Pleez do comment my newest poem too, as interaction via comments is cool I feel and thoughts are best written.
Pls Pleez do comment my newest poem too, as interaction via comments is cool I feel and thoughts are best written.
14th Feb 2020 8:14pm
I do agree with your first comment. I wrote assuming the merriment was on both sides and enjoyed strictly between the couple without spectators.
