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Her.
I don't think I have a word
that means just what I need....
See, I need a word to match a feeling.
It feels like she's the air I breathe.
It's so simple, so complex.
She's my chemical spark.
For the longest time I wanted her,
she's consumed my heart.
She worries she's not enough,
I swear that's not the case....
For her, I'd drop the world.
It's her I can't replace.
that means just what I need....
See, I need a word to match a feeling.
It feels like she's the air I breathe.
It's so simple, so complex.
She's my chemical spark.
For the longest time I wanted her,
she's consumed my heart.
She worries she's not enough,
I swear that's not the case....
For her, I'd drop the world.
It's her I can't replace.
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Re: Her.
4th Oct 2012 2:16am
This is amazing Kristyn, I see you finally found out how to say something that is almost impossible to say.
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4th Oct 2012 2:21am
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4th Oct 2012 2:55am
Alas.. you need to be more confident in yourself love of mine... you're a terrific poet..
I love this <3
I love this <3
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13th Oct 2012 8:42am
It is such a relief to hear that..
Been working on my flow for a long time. Thank you!
Been working on my flow for a long time. Thank you!
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20th Oct 2012 1:14pm
You're welcome young lady. :) You have a tight skill poetic skill set from what I am seeing.
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Anonymous
14th Oct 2012 6:00pm
beautiful content, wrapped up in a beautifully put package :) she is a lucky girl to have this written for her
Well Done
Well Done
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15th Oct 2012 3:27am
I hope she feels the same...
and thank you! I always worry these are too corny for the other members to sit through..
and thank you! I always worry these are too corny for the other members to sit through..