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Cocaine mirror
Cocaine mirror
In white powder
I exist,
a sniff into the past
IN
Then I am the POWER
The powder
The powder
The powder
The powder
invincible,
seXual and
a killer
IN
in the cocaine mirror
ɹoɹɹıɯ ǝuıɐɔoɔ ǝɥʇ uı
uı
ɹǝןןıʞ ɐ
puɐ ןɐnxǝs
'ǝןqıɔuıʌuı
ɹǝpʍod ǝɥʇ
ɹǝpʍod ǝɥʇ
ɹǝpʍod ǝɥʇ
ɹǝpʍod ǝɥʇ
ɹǝʍod ǝɥʇ ɯɐ ı uǝɥʇ
uı
ʇsɐd ǝɥʇ oʇuı ɟɟıus ɐ
'ʇsıxǝ ı
ɹǝpʍod ǝʇıɥʍ uı
In white powder
I exist,
a sniff into the past
IN
Then I am the POWER
The powder
The powder
The powder
The powder
invincible,
seXual and
a killer
IN
in the cocaine mirror
ɹoɹɹıɯ ǝuıɐɔoɔ ǝɥʇ uı
uı
ɹǝןןıʞ ɐ
puɐ ןɐnxǝs
'ǝןqıɔuıʌuı
ɹǝpʍod ǝɥʇ
ɹǝpʍod ǝɥʇ
ɹǝpʍod ǝɥʇ
ɹǝpʍod ǝɥʇ
ɹǝʍod ǝɥʇ ɯɐ ı uǝɥʇ
uı
ʇsɐd ǝɥʇ oʇuı ɟɟıus ɐ
'ʇsıxǝ ı
ɹǝpʍod ǝʇıɥʍ uı
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Re: Cocaine mirror
Anonymous
30th Sep 2012 8:52am
What an original poem, a brilliant idea!
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Re: Cocaine mirror
30th Sep 2012 9:03am
Thank you very much for your feedback
I tried to place in extreme content but didn't
go
Much appreciated and nice to meet
Kind regards
Ricecake
I tried to place in extreme content but didn't
go
Much appreciated and nice to meet
Kind regards
Ricecake
Re: Cocaine mirror
Anonymous
30th Sep 2012 9:58am
Likewise, nice to meet you too!
I think that this one, being short but with the mirored writing is effective enough!
Read your poem this is our god in some competition forum, great one too
enough flattery now
Mourganna¤
I think that this one, being short but with the mirored writing is effective enough!
Read your poem this is our god in some competition forum, great one too
enough flattery now
Mourganna¤
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Re: Cocaine mirror
30th Sep 2012 10:12am
Re: Cocaine mirror
Anonymous
30th Sep 2012 2:06pm
Here you go again, showing off your brilliant mind. Don't know how you did this, but I love it. You are an orginal for sure. :)
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re: Re: Cocaine mirror
30th Sep 2012 10:55pm
Flowergirl I am original, there's only one
of me coz the world couldn't handle
two of me, can you imagine two,
now two flowergirls the world would
benefit from!
of me coz the world couldn't handle
two of me, can you imagine two,
now two flowergirls the world would
benefit from!
Re: Cocaine mirror
30th Sep 2012 3:10pm
Re: Cocaine mirror
30th Sep 2012 10:58pm
Thank you for the read and good comments
I wrote this poem in a flash one moonlit
night under the black sky, POW it came to
me why coc effects people the way it does.
It is a powerful drug!
Best wishes
Ricecake
I wrote this poem in a flash one moonlit
night under the black sky, POW it came to
me why coc effects people the way it does.
It is a powerful drug!
Best wishes
Ricecake
Re: Cocaine mirror
3rd Oct 2012 1:46am
Re: Cocaine mirror
3rd Oct 2012 2:27am
I like your name LogicUnneeded!
Thanks for your good comments today.
Best wishes
Ricecake
Thanks for your good comments today.
Best wishes
Ricecake
Re: Cocaine mirror
8th Oct 2012 9:17pm
Can't say what hasen't already, but the hell with it, this is fantastic! Brilliant in every contex.
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Re: Cocaine mirror
8th Oct 2012 9:23pm
Thank uuuu, and I read and enjoyed your entry in the
comp about sexy sexy and wowwww, well done
for winnnn!!!
Kind rgs
Rice
comp about sexy sexy and wowwww, well done
for winnnn!!!
Kind rgs
Rice