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The Hunted
“I wonder if I take you home
would you still be in love, baby
because I need you tonight........”
Foreplay........
….....the way “we” play
is so damned intense.
I am so damned high right now
It absolutely makes no sense
the way your body makes my body feel
"Is it the way you love me baby?"
Your reaction to the touch of my hand
The taste of my most *intimate* kiss....
....is just enough to
make me loose my mind,
loose all control,
surrender my heart,
give you possession of my soul.........
to be, "The Hunted"
So.........
….....now it's time
for my canine to meet
your sensual young feline.......shall we dine?
Or perhaps, with no intention of being
vulgar or crass,
may I speak to my desire just like this...........
….....it's time for your wet, sweet, creamy pussy
to meet my hard, throbbing, hot dick.
If you were to ask me, I'd say “long overdue”
Who is the hunted?
Is it me or is it "really" you?
Spread those womanly thighs open 4 me because
“I'm so into you”..........and I think that just maybe,
you should "tell me if you want me too?"
Soft and wet
Once upon a rainy night
The heat.......so scintillating
The way your "pussy" grips hold of my *rock* so tight
You make the hair stand up on the back of my neck
causing my back to arch and move......
….....like it has no bones.
Thrusting deeply between your wet thighs
I take flight
I mount up on your pretty wings and ride you home
......to a place beyond paradise.
“The lioness hunts eagerly
to satisfy the needs of the pride
But sometimes, for pleasure
amongst the splendor of the grass,
she cunningly glides through the night
In search of a deep, dark erotic beast
that will satisfy her wanton hunger
bite after decadent bite"
I pray that you allow me to be
you're prey
tonight.......
"...thank you Jill Scott for the use of the term "rock", for sure." ; )
Published 30th Sep 2012
| Edited 1st Oct 2012
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30th Sep 2012 7:56am
1st Oct 2012 3:02am
Anonymous
1st Oct 2012 10:07pm
MrM,
Wow! That part about the lioness going out in search of her deep, dark erotic beast, really did it visually for me! I could hear the Gunners in the background, "Do you know where you are Baby?..." Cool write, Bro!
tornado
Wow! That part about the lioness going out in search of her deep, dark erotic beast, really did it visually for me! I could hear the Gunners in the background, "Do you know where you are Baby?..." Cool write, Bro!
tornado
2nd Oct 2012 7:05am
Correct me if I'm wrong, Music!
I heard a little Lisa Lisa & Cult Jam, MusicallyMrM, Jill Scott, SWV and Groove Theory.
I sensed some deep penetration going on. Very enjoyable read as usual! ;)
I heard a little Lisa Lisa & Cult Jam, MusicallyMrM, Jill Scott, SWV and Groove Theory.
I sensed some deep penetration going on. Very enjoyable read as usual! ;)
2nd Oct 2012 7:11am
If anyone would have captured the music, it would be you "J" (almost did it again...lol) I miss our song sharing. You found every allusion to every song. You my dear are good. : )
2nd Oct 2012 7:14am
2nd Oct 2012 7:50am
4th Oct 2012 1:10am
Hot and extremely demanding on the senses!
Thanks for a powerful read!
Love it!
Thanks for a powerful read!
Love it!
4th Oct 2012 1:26am
6th Oct 2012 10:37pm
I love the hunt of being hunted! You are so amazing with a pen! Your ink is so arousing! Thanks for sharing such a sexy write...xoxo
17th Oct 2012 12:04pm
I pray that you allow me to be
you're prey
tonight.......
I like any piece of work that makes a person question things. When questions can just roll, that's a good collection to flow. Your stream of work is awesome, comrade MrM!
17th Oct 2012 12:13pm
