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sweetest love
i love you
not for a moment
not for just today
but forever
and in all ways
my sweetest love
you bring joy
to my heart
all of my love
to you i impart
struck as i am
by cupid's dart
oh, sweetest love
cleansed with tears
i will never know
what it is like
to be a part
of your life
but i'll be brave
and take things
in stride for
in my heart
the sweetest love
does abide
not for a moment
not for just today
but forever
and in all ways
my sweetest love
you bring joy
to my heart
all of my love
to you i impart
struck as i am
by cupid's dart
oh, sweetest love
cleansed with tears
i will never know
what it is like
to be a part
of your life
but i'll be brave
and take things
in stride for
in my heart
the sweetest love
does abide
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Re: sweetest love
30th Sep 2012 1:32am
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30th Sep 2012 1:17pm
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30th Sep 2012 4:39pm
That is so nice of you. Thank you, Ken. So good to see you. I've missed you! :)
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Anonymous
1st Oct 2012 4:20am
Sometimes we can love someone to the depths of our soul, yet never experience the joy of sharing that love with them. Beautiful write. :)
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1st Oct 2012 11:15pm
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2nd Oct 2012 9:32pm
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6th Oct 2012 6:43pm
Thank you so much for your lovely comment. I appreciate your taking the time to read and comment on my poem.
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2nd Oct 2012 11:23pm
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6th Oct 2012 6:45pm
Thank you so much for your wonderful remarks. Your comments mean so much to me! Hugs to you!
Re: sweetest love
3rd Oct 2012 2:55pm
I just had a couple questions regarding your lovely, passionate poem. 1. Why won't you "ever know what it is like to be a part of your life." After all, there is love, powerful love, in fact. Wouldn't "intuition," at the very least, allow you to be part of another's life? Or did I misunderstand something? 2. You go from the factual, actual to the symbolic ("cupid's dart"). This seems like a leap the reader cannot jump with you into. You are an extremely good poet, who uses metaphor and symbolism, as well as concreteness, nicely and bravely. Thank you for sharing this with me.
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6th Oct 2012 6:58pm
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. I apologize for not answering sooner but I haven't had as much time lately to be on here tdue to work schedule. I appreciate your lovely remarks very much. As for your question regarding why I couldn't be a part of his life, the relationship was doomed before it ever really got off the ground. I worked with the man and even though there was a big age difference we were very attracted to each other. He ended up being transferred and I never heard from again.
Thanks again for your wonderful remarks.
Thanks again for your wonderful remarks.