Pedro, the Ambivalent Domicile

Is that even considered poetry man?? It was halarious though!! haha
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it is poetry, but poetry done before, questioning language properties, of fucking objects, etc

I meant to post this in Prose but was in a rush to get off the computer.  So I moved it to Prose.  Thanks for the look out and the comments.  Glad you enjoyed it.

I like a lot how this shifts from being very mannerly and reserved, to suddenly being loud and unrestrained. It works well, especially with this interjection of: 'Nevertheless, Pedro didn't mind.' That made me smile.

Thanks for the comments.

DMON - I moved it to Prose.  It fits more there, I think.

vuxus_tuxsusa - actually its part of a book I wrote (I'm shopping around) in which I write things that sound like children's stories but they're really adult or offensive.

Merda - Thanks a lot!  I have to say all my comics are rant comics with the exception of Mitch Hedberg.

A very strange prose poem. which is made all the more enjoyable for it's apparent lack of meaning. Like a modern Aesop's fable, but without a message, merely a story to which the reader can add his own purpose.

this made my day