My Pain

Reminded me of one my favorite musical artists, Bonnie Raitt, and her song, "Valley Of Pain".

I've  never heard it I'm gonna look it up..

I like it...  Love how she says she uses her pain like a gun..

Yup and you should see her play the slide guitar!

While gasping for air, realize that you're wrong - somebody is always listening out there. You never know. and here vou got two, even commenting,
meaning involved to some degree with your writing. You touched us. Pain is a universal thing, it crosses the skyline like a laundry line.

Thank you... That was very sweet it just doesn't feel like that some times it just feels no one can see your even in pain especially when your suppose to be the strong one. But thanks for seeing me :)

Thanks... I think... It sounded good .. ;)

Never second guess yourself when writing. I find myself doing that I then change it and go back to my original line lol

thanks :)

Nice rythym and flow. Are pain only makes us stronger all the great poets wrote of it.

Thank you!! :)

reminded me of a friend of mine.good flow

Thank you....

Yes we do, and I think we were all drawn here together because we hear each other, like dolphins calling across the ocean waves for anyone who can hear our sorrow and feel our pain. We are all here swimming in the school of life... jj