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Damaged goods
Give me your pain I will put it with mine
I will save it for later in the back of my mind
Give me your tears I will keep them around
To be taken out daily and worn with a frown
Give me your fears I will put them away
For what good is fear when I die every day
Give me your hatred I will use it with care
To direct at myself when I lay my soul bare
But don't give me a kindness I could never return
Because bitterness and hatred is all I have learned
Do not give me your love for it wouldn't be safe
I've a hole in my heart with no love to replace
Do not give me your trust for I wouldn't know how
Mine has always been broken replaced only with doubt
And don't give me your laughter for it would not sit well
With the pain and self loathing that lives where I dwell
I will save it for later in the back of my mind
Give me your tears I will keep them around
To be taken out daily and worn with a frown
Give me your fears I will put them away
For what good is fear when I die every day
Give me your hatred I will use it with care
To direct at myself when I lay my soul bare
But don't give me a kindness I could never return
Because bitterness and hatred is all I have learned
Do not give me your love for it wouldn't be safe
I've a hole in my heart with no love to replace
Do not give me your trust for I wouldn't know how
Mine has always been broken replaced only with doubt
And don't give me your laughter for it would not sit well
With the pain and self loathing that lives where I dwell
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Re: Damaged goods
26th Sep 2012 5:55pm
I often feel the same way
yet I find the rope to pull myself out of the darkness and even with a broken heart and a bruised soul I find a way to smile!
Nice write Shaunda,
yet I find the rope to pull myself out of the darkness and even with a broken heart and a bruised soul I find a way to smile!
Nice write Shaunda,
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re: Re: Damaged goods
26th Sep 2012 6:10pm
Thank you. Yes, I used to feel that way when I was young. Thank god I'm over those shit feelings. I am a very happy person now, I no longer have the dreams, I have not spoken to either parent for 20+ years. Life is good.
Re: Damaged goods
26th Sep 2012 7:31pm
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26th Sep 2012 10:33pm
Re: Damaged goods
27th Sep 2012 6:27pm
The emotion behind this hits deep in my soul ,i've been there b4 many times and sumtimes i still visit that place of self pity ...beautifully worded
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re: Re: Damaged goods
27th Sep 2012 6:50pm
Thank you again. I really appreciate your comments. On occasion I go there too, but rarely.
Re: Damaged goods
11th Oct 2012 9:23am
Re: Damaged goods
18th Oct 2012 6:49am
We who dwell in the shadows of doubt...
Love this poem. Anger and pain - you thrive on them as an artist.
"Am I fucking Crazy" is another good one. It hisses with pain and venom. Brilliant.
[Why kill the fruitful pain with painkillers????-just a thought]
Thank you, Shaunda.
Love this poem. Anger and pain - you thrive on them as an artist.
"Am I fucking Crazy" is another good one. It hisses with pain and venom. Brilliant.
[Why kill the fruitful pain with painkillers????-just a thought]
Thank you, Shaunda.
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Re: Damaged goods
18th Oct 2012 6:55am
Sorry. I forgot... Did you notice there is a great readiness for love, by an ultra-sensitive persona in this poem? No iron curtain there...In fact,
the opposite is true.Tender skin....
the opposite is true.Tender skin....
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Re: Damaged goods
12th Nov 2012 10:58pm
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