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TheeDu'ration[s]OfForever
poomfotobyDaKozak
nMonSep24,2012a12:45am ·
Youhavebeensavedchanges
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it
is like what happens when
no'thing happens & yr
waiting, waiting for 'happen', or
a similar occurrence / seems long
overdue, & y'feels terribly
overdone by words'like
' love you forever ' or
'we're in this
for the duration, dude'......
- thee duration of forever -
o,ye gibberin' junkgods !
what-a-Heavy con
cept [u a li zatio n ]!
Heavy'nough to sqaush a decade -
or 5 or six - &every
fckndumbass meatbag
tha'dare step into these bleedin
t e n s
that consume lifetimes,
&'ventually eats all yr meantimes,
btween'times, til
thee meat thee meat is
unrecognizable as anything
that may've once housed life,
a life, yOur Life[o'mine] .....&
}t'be quite blunt{, just becomes that
much more shit t'be washed
away
wit th'tides'o them cleansing
waters...seas,oceans, &many
other wise
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nMonSep24,2012a12:45am ·
Youhavebeensavedchanges
***** *****
it
is like what happens when
no'thing happens & yr
waiting, waiting for 'happen', or
a similar occurrence / seems long
overdue, & y'feels terribly
overdone by words'like
' love you forever ' or
'we're in this
for the duration, dude'......
- thee duration of forever -
o,ye gibberin' junkgods !
what-a-Heavy con
cept [u a li zatio n ]!
Heavy'nough to sqaush a decade -
or 5 or six - &every
fckndumbass meatbag
tha'dare step into these bleedin
t e n s
that consume lifetimes,
&'ventually eats all yr meantimes,
btween'times, til
thee meat thee meat is
unrecognizable as anything
that may've once housed life,
a life, yOur Life[o'mine] .....&
}t'be quite blunt{, just becomes that
much more shit t'be washed
away
wit th'tides'o them cleansing
waters...seas,oceans, &many
other wise
ccccccccccccdkzk24sept2012cccccccccccc
Published 24th Sep 2012
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24th Sep 2012 6:02am
I so agree. If its what I think it means. Love is a waist. People are in love with being in love. That's a problem . Loved this one
24th Sep 2012 6:09am
thanks Gi.......
i ain't sayin it's a waste, butt wee ego's 'love with being in love' t'prop or reflect ego's delusions of 'self', sure do
make a fckn mess of what could
be, uh, maybe less a fckn mess....
shit, i dunno -it just fell outta one'a th'holes in my head
i ain't sayin it's a waste, butt wee ego's 'love with being in love' t'prop or reflect ego's delusions of 'self', sure do
make a fckn mess of what could
be, uh, maybe less a fckn mess....
shit, i dunno -it just fell outta one'a th'holes in my head
