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just my opinion on churches

What pushes me away from these holy places
Is my lack of understanding
For how the word of a God
Can be spoken in human tongue
We are made in his image
Not his power
I believe if we were to speak
The actual word
The true language....
How can it be originated within gold
Beset with crystals and diamonds of uttermost clarity
And then tried to be
Made from copper and zinc
set with zirconium
The word is altered
It's no longer beautiful
And as it's passed from
Writing to fathers mouths
it's quality only decreases
It goes from crysstal clear waters of truth
To poisoned lead filled tap
That you expect us to drink
Will it not poison the soul?
I am not allowed to love my God as I do
The moment I step into his "house"
The snakes within spread rumors
I am a good catholic I love my Lord
And yet you talk about me!
There in front of him
I can't stand this place
Written by KahakuHiga-Parker
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