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Life(love)

Sitting down,grab a cup of coffee
start to think,life jus dn add up
love you,love you too
hi mum,hi dad
like a sharpened pencil gettin blunt
life quickly ends
tryin to cut all the loose ends
trying to tie the final knot
trying to feed the needy lot
buh life jus wont make it easy
as writin on a paper
passin a ball to your team player
passing back the ball fails
expections not met
like an 'ugly' newborn
u gave it your all
pennies and coins knock at your door...
Written by JakeBlack (BLACKnBONE)
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