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Holes
Deep, dark,
Seemingly empty
No one will know the secrets you hold
I tripped and then stumbled
And fell deep inside you
I bathed in your warmth
Yet shivered with cold
My heart filled with fear
And my body went numb
My mind was consumed by doubt
But despite any chance
I was given to stop
I was never compelled to get out
Now, far too late
For any regrets
My body and mind submit
I’ll close my eyes
And let myself go
And hope you’re a bottomless pit...
Seemingly empty
No one will know the secrets you hold
I tripped and then stumbled
And fell deep inside you
I bathed in your warmth
Yet shivered with cold
My heart filled with fear
And my body went numb
My mind was consumed by doubt
But despite any chance
I was given to stop
I was never compelled to get out
Now, far too late
For any regrets
My body and mind submit
I’ll close my eyes
And let myself go
And hope you’re a bottomless pit...
Published 30th Apr 2010
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Anonymous
30th Apr 2010 4:58am
The last line is fantastic, compelling and unique. Compelling and unique. A perfect evocation of quite literally falling in love. Your rhythm and purpose are assured, and overall this is a rich and confident poem.
30th Apr 2010 1:59pm
