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Flowing
I bow before the water goddess
and arch my back
trapped beneath her tumultuous waterfall
I plead for release
my body moving rhythmically
thrashing and thrusting
a prayer on my lips
and arch my back
trapped beneath her tumultuous waterfall
I plead for release
my body moving rhythmically
thrashing and thrusting
a prayer on my lips
Published 7th Sep 2012
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Anonymous
12th Sep 2012 5:52pm
This is really quite profound and for such a short piece, it packs a punch.
Excellent.
Welcome by the way :)
Excellent.
Welcome by the way :)
12th Sep 2012 11:07pm
Thanks for the warm welcome Missy, and I'm glad that you liked Flowing! I've actually been actively trying to write longer pieces, but the short and to the point ones always come easier to me :P
