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your love

Your love
cries
like a grieved banshee
and
smashes
the ties
of this bleating
night.

Written by Cheyenne_64

Published 30th Aug 2012

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Re: your love

Anonymous

30th Aug 2012 7:01pm

Hello Cheyenne

Well I think this short verse has what it needs... A nice punch with the beauty required to get to your point.

Well done.

Al -x-

6th Sep 2012 2:37pm

Thanks so much...i am Italian and try my best to write in English, a language i love!

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