flooding river

I like your wording, it gives a visiual sense. :)

Thank you so much for your wonderful remark.  I appreciate it!  Faith

Welcome to DUP!:) This is a great start for sure. I think at times most of us feel like we are in a prison. Life washes away our soul. Good image you create here. :)

Thank you for your wonderful welcome.  I'm thrilled you enjoyed my poem!

Hello

I saw your piece in a comp. And thought wow! So I came to visit and well, yes you provided what I expected and more.

You are an extremely tallented writer of poetry and I thank you for the opportunity to read your wonderful words of art.

Al -x-

Wow.  I am both humbled and honored by your lovely comments.  Thank you so much.  You just made my heart smile.  Faith

This reads as a song. A blues song. And very appropriate as my home state, Louisiana has flooded from a hurricane. Nicw piece.

Thank you for your wonderful remarks!  I'm so sorry you got hit hard with the hurricane.  I'm in the deep south and we got lots of rain, too but not nearly as much as you all did.  Are you cajun by any chance?  Faith

No, I live in the north part of the state but most of my family are in New Orleans area. Not cajun, just country. Thank you.

you are most welcome...i hope your family is alright

Nice fresh depiction of a river ... so original ...

What a nice surprise to see you have read one of my older pieces. Thank you for that and for your lovely comments. I appreciate it. This was actually my first post on DUP many moons ago.

your powerful and evocative poem that captures the destructive force and relentless nature of a river in flood. you evokes a feeling of helplessness and despair, particularly with the lines describing the river taking away one's home and leaving them naked and alone. your ink effectively captures the raw power of nature and the devastating consequences it can bring.

Thank you very much!

Hello faithmairee,
I went back in time to your first poem. I love it. Great description. The visual, the detail and the image is perfect. A work of art for your first poem here.  

How very kind of you to say! It's really nice that you've shown an interest in my earlier works