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Trickling Blood
Blood trickling, blood trickling
as the steel ran through my wrist
so smooth
like a river the blood would flow
oh the sweet beauty
the sweet beauty of cutting
people would beg me to stop
but it is to sweet of a release to ever stop
as the steel ran through my wrist
so smooth
like a river the blood would flow
oh the sweet beauty
the sweet beauty of cutting
people would beg me to stop
but it is to sweet of a release to ever stop
Published 21st Aug 2012
| Edited 27th Aug 2012
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21st Aug 2012 11:38pm
Wow, I have imagery of this. I could never exactly find words to describe, but you have nailed it perfectly. For your first write on here, I'm VERY impressed. Good, no AMAZING job here. :)
3rd Oct 2014 2:08pm
