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Excuses or Fear
When you get all your situations straightened out,
your sickness, financial issues, weight issues
and your focus on life in order…
Let me know, because the rest of us poor slobs
live life and live love as a gift, that should be in
each and every one of our days first and foremost...
And the majority looks at love not as an
inconvenience, but divinity...
your sickness, financial issues, weight issues
and your focus on life in order…
Let me know, because the rest of us poor slobs
live life and live love as a gift, that should be in
each and every one of our days first and foremost...
And the majority looks at love not as an
inconvenience, but divinity...
Published 3rd Aug 2012
| Edited 23rd Jan 2016
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3rd Aug 2012 6:51am
Anonymous
3rd Aug 2012 10:58am
I like it and try to let fear go....
Nice write Critical Mass.
Strider
Nice write Critical Mass.
Strider
4th Aug 2012 00:10am
3rd Aug 2012 2:44pm
It is amazing how much those who are not drowning take for granted the ease of everyday...until they themselves are drowning....thank you for hitting still another facet of the human condition along the event horizon....
4th Aug 2012 00:24am
I am somewhat concieted when it comes to my personal thoughts and I will tell you that much poetry outside of my own usually sucks.........Yours however make think that you have a firm grasp of the real world and the aptitude of man. By the way friend sorry I messed up on the title, I apolagize because if it were me I'd be pissed---sorry
