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Unwanted
The careless lash of spite,
Calculated cruelty spoken.
This is of no consequence.
Although it is brittle and broken,
It is my pride, not my soul.
Calculated cruelty spoken.
This is of no consequence.
Although it is brittle and broken,
It is my pride, not my soul.
Published 1st Aug 2012
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17th Oct 2012 11:26am
read all of your work and liking it all well done xD
Commented on this small yet devine piece as no one else had and it looked lonely in it's "Calculated cruelty spoken" way xD LOVED THAT LINE WELL DONE
Commented on this small yet devine piece as no one else had and it looked lonely in it's "Calculated cruelty spoken" way xD LOVED THAT LINE WELL DONE
17th Oct 2012 1:13pm
Aww, thanks, Johnny, for such a thoughtful and uplifting comment.
I'm so pleased you liked it, and thanks for the encouragement.
:)
I'm so pleased you liked it, and thanks for the encouragement.
:)
14th Nov 2012 8:20pm
14th Nov 2012 8:23pm
6th Jan 2013 9:32am
oooo...how did I miss this one!!
simplistic but powerful and thought provoking
love that shit..
simplistic but powerful and thought provoking
love that shit..
6th Jan 2013 9:36am
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3rd Jan 2014 4:01am
Awesome beginning atak. its always nice to see somebody's beginning.
helps me to understand you better.
helps me to understand you better.
5th Jan 2014 8:42pm
17th Feb 2015 6:44am
Like Cesar I've decided to spend time seeing how many entered the DUP kingdom ... This is marvelous. I could complie an ebook just on first writes and this would surely be in there.
6th Apr 2015 2:56pm
