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Our minds are a juxtaposition
From my heart,just an omission
I've lost the feeling
along with a lot of blood
We sit and share the moment
The paint is still wet
Our pain is a juxtaposition
From my heart,just an omission
I've lost the feeling
along with a lot of blood
We sit and share the moment
The paint is still wet
Our pain is a juxtaposition
Published 1st Aug 2012
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2nd Aug 2012 2:41am
I think I love this. Like, for real. Like, I keep reading it, and I'm not sure if I'm disturbed or excited in the THAT ROCKS way.
I love the way you wrapped the five images together, telling a full story, in so few lines.
minds, side-by-sude,
heart
lost blood
paint
pain side-by-side.
I'm gonna go with the YAY factor. Good stuff. Happy writing, B
I love the way you wrapped the five images together, telling a full story, in so few lines.
minds, side-by-sude,
heart
lost blood
paint
pain side-by-side.
I'm gonna go with the YAY factor. Good stuff. Happy writing, B
2nd Aug 2012 1:55pm
