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deflower ii
a little nervous?
I know it will hurt
a little pain
a little blood
I will take care of you
I'll lick your wounds
I'll comfort you
I'll be a gentle teacher
I will show you everything
take you in every way
(I want to feel you squirm)
I'll tell you what to do
and you'll be a good girl
and do everything I say
just let go
and trust me
(such a good girl)
I know it will hurt
a little pain
a little blood
I will take care of you
I'll lick your wounds
I'll comfort you
I'll be a gentle teacher
I will show you everything
take you in every way
(I want to feel you squirm)
I'll tell you what to do
and you'll be a good girl
and do everything I say
just let go
and trust me
(such a good girl)
Published 4th Apr 2010
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Anonymous
4th Apr 2010 7:45am
and haunting as your poems always are, maybe lacking a bit the serrated edges of your previous poems, still you never lack in passion nathan
4th Apr 2010 8:52am
yes even with a subject as tender and delicate as this I still remain dark.. thank you for saying it still holds my usual passion.. you're so kind and generous with your comments..
Anonymous
5th Apr 2010 1:46am
as always, this one sears the heart with it's painful, hideous melancholy. Love the line "I'll lick your wounds" for some reason.
5th Apr 2010 7:06am
heh surprised you like that line its quite perverse in context but so glad you dig the poem.. my favorite line is "let go and trust me"
