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Definitions of Reason
A blue Sky-
Gods foundation of Heaven
Living in a Day-
A habit worth Forming
Days gone By-
An occurrence that creates Life
A greatest Moment-
Only determined once you have stopped Living
A good Friend-
Anyone who touches your Soul
A Relationship-
Formed by Communication
Age Old-
Generation to Generation
Does a poem need to Rhyme?-
Not if it has Reason
P-O-E-M-
Part Of Eternal Makeup
Enemy-
Anyone or thing that threatens or argues any of the above!
You Are Free To Believe In
Your Right To Rhyme Or To REASON.
Gods foundation of Heaven
Living in a Day-
A habit worth Forming
Days gone By-
An occurrence that creates Life
A greatest Moment-
Only determined once you have stopped Living
A good Friend-
Anyone who touches your Soul
A Relationship-
Formed by Communication
Age Old-
Generation to Generation
Does a poem need to Rhyme?-
Not if it has Reason
P-O-E-M-
Part Of Eternal Makeup
Enemy-
Anyone or thing that threatens or argues any of the above!
You Are Free To Believe In
Your Right To Rhyme Or To REASON.
Published 10th Aug 2009
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26th Aug 2009 5:05pm
Im not sure how to take that? It seems to be a poem in the first 7 facts. But then it kinda changes to a more opinionated essay. I think it's alright to have opinions, but maybe not to express them in such an obvious form. Define your feelings through metapor's and cleverness. That's what I'd like to see :) I think you could be a really good writer if you set your mind to it. But who knows, I have only read this poem of yours. You should post some more :) I will definatly read them.
27th Aug 2009 10:20pm
This was written for the poll, not necessarily in your idea of traditional poetry of course. Just something to get people involved in the site, to comment and post. Now, what i wonder would your opinion be of the people here writing lyrics, not poems??? I think that a poem MUST rhyme and be in perfect verse to be considered worthy of the name to your artist heart. That is your "Right to Reason." You should have added a line mam!
In closing, Your work is traditional and good. I will read it!
Suggestion: Read Battle Cry of a Teen...very essay, and Non traditional, yet Extreme! It is a great Piece, and never Rhymes.
In closing, Your work is traditional and good. I will read it!
Suggestion: Read Battle Cry of a Teen...very essay, and Non traditional, yet Extreme! It is a great Piece, and never Rhymes.
1st Sep 2009 4:11pm
Oh i didnt mean any disrespect. I do love the expressions you put in this. My favourite is
"A good Friend-
Anyone who touches your Soul"
I was only hoping that maybe you could help me understand it more. That was all :) It's not that I didnt like it :)
"A good Friend-
Anyone who touches your Soul"
I was only hoping that maybe you could help me understand it more. That was all :) It's not that I didnt like it :)
12th Sep 2009 5:51pm
13th Sep 2013 2:26am
The ending phenomenal ...
Love the conclusion of this piece.
"You Are Free To Believe In
Your Right To Rhyme Or To REASON."
Very well Done.
(^,..,^)
Darker
Love the conclusion of this piece.
"You Are Free To Believe In
Your Right To Rhyme Or To REASON."
Very well Done.
(^,..,^)
Darker
30th Nov 2013 12:18pm
