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Fern
Boredom, pencil head, amoeba living
i can't think
i'll write instead
from my room
with bad handwriting
can i get some sympathy
sympathize on my bad deeds
all the children and all the women
cry at my parting
i'll go to the sun
select few
burn in your memory
i can't think
i'll write instead
from my room
with bad handwriting
can i get some sympathy
sympathize on my bad deeds
all the children and all the women
cry at my parting
i'll go to the sun
select few
burn in your memory
Published 24th Jul 2012
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24th Jul 2012 9:20am
I find all of your writes cryptic or riddle like. I have read all of your pieces and come back to read again to try and crack them so to speak :)
I like a challenge, great job and I will keep trying. :)
I like a challenge, great job and I will keep trying. :)
24th Jul 2012 10:10am
best comments always seem to come from you. glad you understand the nature of my stuff. i don't want to be great, i just want to be heard
24th Jul 2012 11:02am
Thank you.
I wrote one that is a bit different, I fail to use punctuation in my writes, it's my way and I refuse to conform :) So I wrote a piece in "punctuation" called "Break The Mind"
I wrote one that is a bit different, I fail to use punctuation in my writes, it's my way and I refuse to conform :) So I wrote a piece in "punctuation" called "Break The Mind"
