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Good Night Peace
Silence,never!
Violence forever
You've made me an eternal sadist
Steady drunk and never sober
Evil plots run through my thoughts
Love shrinks into oblivion
Cold as death itself I live on
Nothing but vengeance to carry on
Hidden in the dark
In the heat of anger I bask
To cause pain unbearable I task
My little soul can't relax
Until my foes are brought to rout
Until my wrath is fully poured out
Until wailing,agony and blood take over the street
Until then its good night peace
Violence forever
You've made me an eternal sadist
Steady drunk and never sober
Evil plots run through my thoughts
Love shrinks into oblivion
Cold as death itself I live on
Nothing but vengeance to carry on
Hidden in the dark
In the heat of anger I bask
To cause pain unbearable I task
My little soul can't relax
Until my foes are brought to rout
Until my wrath is fully poured out
Until wailing,agony and blood take over the street
Until then its good night peace
Published 22nd Jul 2012
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22nd Jul 2012 11:10pm
I totally enjoyed this in light of several current events! The "craving" for destruction and violence seems so easy to feed!
22nd Jul 2012 11:15pm
23rd Jul 2012 1:11am
I love how you make anger and rage so desirable in the language, yet you associate it with alcoholism, so it translates as a problem and not natural.
Because I love this poem you have written, I would be very anxious to re-read it, after the meter is more closely edited!
Great job:)
Because I love this poem you have written, I would be very anxious to re-read it, after the meter is more closely edited!
Great job:)
