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Plastic Man
Noticed and ignored
daydream fantasy
the daily rising
and the setting of the sun
without consciousness
my right eye is blind
i wont survive
my mind is a dramatist
daydream fantasy
the daily rising
and the setting of the sun
without consciousness
my right eye is blind
i wont survive
my mind is a dramatist
Published 21st Jul 2012
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Anonymous
21st Jul 2012 2:13pm
Love it..short but potent..Peace, Miki
"my mind is a dramatist" they way of the mind huh. I love the challenge of keeping mine quiet when I want to.
Great write, one to keep me pondering.
Great write, one to keep me pondering.
22nd Jul 2012 5:01am
Anonymous
15th Mar 2014 10:29am
An interesting last line, which sums up the questionable nature of this poem. I'm not entirely sure what this piece is about, but I think part of the beauty of poetry is that we don't always need to understand things that are written down.
Thank you for the read.
Thank you for the read.
