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Slip Knot
You're the slip knot around my neck
another ghost to violate my bed
with could-have-been's
and should-have-been's
that unravelled in the details
of a story that will forever remain untold
© Indie Adams 2012
another ghost to violate my bed
with could-have-been's
and should-have-been's
that unravelled in the details
of a story that will forever remain untold
© Indie Adams 2012
Published 18th Jul 2012
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18th Jul 2012 6:44pm
18th Jul 2012 11:52pm
18th Jul 2012 7:27pm
i like it...........as a person who can see and hear ghosts i love any poem or story with ghosts in them....
18th Jul 2012 11:54pm
19th Jul 2012 8:43pm
your welcome Miss Indie.i`ve read alot of your poems and i think you are a great poet.. i have`nt had the chance or time to post any of mine but hope to get to soon.
18th Jul 2012 10:06pm
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19th Feb 2013 8:47pm
I really enjoyed this Ms Indie...
it spoke volumes with no words left
to waste! (smile)
Fire
it spoke volumes with no words left
to waste! (smile)
Fire
21st Feb 2013 3:22am
Thank you Fire for you lovely feedback :) I'm glad the minimalistic approach works for you.
Peace, Indie
Peace, Indie
5th Dec 2014 9:04pm
5th Dec 2014 9:09pm
Thank you Brandon for you comment and the add :) much appreciated. I'm glad (and sorry) you can relate.
