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Where are you kindred?
does gray-shade-film appreciator live
are there subtlety seeker remaining?
detective art of reading inbetween;
lost in raw write solved but skipped imagine
progressive force in atmospheric noir
shadow casts terror and panic subtle
random smoke draws desire abstract but clear
senses constant expands pops as bubble
has overused colors made us purblind
elementary riddles made us smart
shadows has become but the raylight's bind
and fresh mysteries are on a-la-carte
in this isle of bore array, in dismay
finding you, who sees hues in shade of gray
are there subtlety seeker remaining?
detective art of reading inbetween;
lost in raw write solved but skipped imagine
progressive force in atmospheric noir
shadow casts terror and panic subtle
random smoke draws desire abstract but clear
senses constant expands pops as bubble
has overused colors made us purblind
elementary riddles made us smart
shadows has become but the raylight's bind
and fresh mysteries are on a-la-carte
in this isle of bore array, in dismay
finding you, who sees hues in shade of gray
Published 16th Jul 2012
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Anonymous
17th Jul 2012 1:52am
people think gray
is not a colour
but in art school
there is an exercise
to make many shades
of grey...so you learn
depth of perception
sometimes a black and white
photo says it better
to much colour
can fade the content
so if you want
excellence in colour
first start in black and white
is not a colour
but in art school
there is an exercise
to make many shades
of grey...so you learn
depth of perception
sometimes a black and white
photo says it better
to much colour
can fade the content
so if you want
excellence in colour
first start in black and white
17th Jul 2012 2:26am
x'lent
grammatic degeneration
t'show that
color be smuch more
colorful
that our constrictive
congested
thinking w'ill
allow
.....or something like that
grammatic degeneration
t'show that
color be smuch more
colorful
that our constrictive
congested
thinking w'ill
allow
.....or something like that
18th Jul 2012 11:47pm
Glad you live
Shame you're far away
I stay an alien on my planet
Thank You metrippyxfriend
Shame you're far away
I stay an alien on my planet
Thank You metrippyxfriend
eye donot de'ny it, butt wh'ere is far-away. Iguess
The Orient is thusly far enough, butt waddu'aye'know?
aye th'ought to try to neg
otiate a release
of lien re: 'my'
21stCent 'late onset'
aliency issues, butt
could no find thee door
into thee
Real(i)ty Office.....
like how cute is that? ar-har-harrrrrrr
The Orient is thusly far enough, butt waddu'aye'know?
aye th'ought to try to neg
otiate a release
of lien re: 'my'
21stCent 'late onset'
aliency issues, butt
could no find thee door
into thee
Real(i)ty Office.....
like how cute is that? ar-har-harrrrrrr
19th Jul 2012 5:07pm
far away is when you have to travel by air
mayye releast it less chemical so mayeye decipher it?
mayye releast it less chemical so mayeye decipher it?
