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hiding
the lurker
the hidden one
what are you hiding from?
and for what reason?
the curiosity is killing
the cat reflex
in the back of my mind
which is hidden somewhere
between the walls of repressed memory
and the frontal lobe..
who are you?
why does the disguise..
attract so much of my attention?
when we don't need answers
we'll let you know
but maybe the mystery is better left
buried
like I'd bury my cock
in the back of your throat
if only I knew where in the dark
I should stab
the hidden one
what are you hiding from?
and for what reason?
the curiosity is killing
the cat reflex
in the back of my mind
which is hidden somewhere
between the walls of repressed memory
and the frontal lobe..
who are you?
why does the disguise..
attract so much of my attention?
when we don't need answers
we'll let you know
but maybe the mystery is better left
buried
like I'd bury my cock
in the back of your throat
if only I knew where in the dark
I should stab
Published 27th Mar 2010
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Anonymous
27th Mar 2010 1:06am
are very very good, as is the final reference to oral sex. You make the blow job sound like this dark, haunting and yet beautiful entity, ghostly and always just out of reach. (I know that sounds strange and even somewhat silly, but there we go). Don't think you need the ellipses after "disguise", and you only really need one dot following "frontal lobe", but those are my only gripes.
27th Mar 2010 1:16am
I like killing the cat reflex line too.. as for the ellipses.. still trying to get those out of my system.. its like trying to stop any bad habit.. trying to kick morphine at the moment too lol
Anonymous
29th Mar 2010 9:49am
It felt very Jack the ripper up to the blow job bit... I agree with Jack n the dark and beautiful but disagree wth the text pointers, txt is txext, I no wat ya mean and so do U, when it gets reduced to a point of useless... let it roll I say.
29th Mar 2010 6:33pm
