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the morbose seed
the morbid fucking curiosity in us
is more overpowering than
empathy
when it comes down to saving a life
or just standing there
watching them suffer
like testosterone in the rapist's belly
we need to fuck
or watched the fucked get even more damaged
inside and out
it's in our veins
like every other odd chemical
or thought
is more overpowering than
empathy
when it comes down to saving a life
or just standing there
watching them suffer
like testosterone in the rapist's belly
we need to fuck
or watched the fucked get even more damaged
inside and out
it's in our veins
like every other odd chemical
or thought
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Anonymous
26th Mar 2010 8:37am
bring out the modant curiosity in us far more beautifully than i did nathan, honestly.This one still laced with pain conveys so much.
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re: u
26th Mar 2010 8:47am
I wouldnt say better than yours but on the same level.. we are contemporaries are we not :) thank you so for the compliments.. you're a doll.. and in the book i'll put (2 priya) as a note.. so I remember your own poem and how you inspire(d) me.. as always.. couldn't have done it without you..
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Anonymous
26th Mar 2010 8:56am
you are awesome nathan,i dont know what else to say thanks so much dear
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26th Mar 2010 9:23am
hugs hugs hugs dear friend.. hey you're pretty darn awesome yourself ;)
As usual you convey a universal truth
Anonymous
26th Mar 2010 7:03pm
with harsh and gritty, realistic language. That comment on Facebook was right; you really are the baddest of the bad ass poets. Few others have made me feel more pain, or helped me see the darker truths of life with such startling, unapologetic clarity. Love the testosterone metaphor, by the way.
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re: As usual you convey a universal truth
27th Mar 2010 00:48am
yeah that's ned for you.. baddest poet.. I like that.. he's the guy that owns the gallery I do quite a few shows at.. apparently a fan of more than my art htough.. as for truth.. I can only hope I speak it half as much as I mean to..
Thats amazing!
26th Mar 2010 11:48pm
i really like the way it blatently says things, but also has a deeper meaning. And i agree with jack heslop too
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re: Thats amazing!
27th Mar 2010 00:47am
i am blunt I confess.. a deeper meaning? I see it everywhere.. I am just reporting on the fact ;) xoxo
truthfull
27th Mar 2010 6:09am
re: truthfull
28th Mar 2010 5:31am
we are sick creatures whether we like to admit it or not.. thanks for the compliment :)