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Mall Observations

A three story structure shaped like a sea horse
and I am inside of it's chest cavity, watching these very beings
walks to and fro. Some with a place to go, some just walking around-- as if to put on a show.

You have the family outings, the bored shoppers, loners, stalkers and store prawlers.
The whiney children, the texters, the "I-Have-To-Buy-Everything-Before-Next-Season".
The punk hipsters and the early school shoppers, the talkative preppy kids and the lonely drifter.
Among the aromas of over priced perfume, pretzals, nair salons and hair condition.
Candles and colonge and the sweat of so many people swimming through the motions.
There is a community of negative and postive, the bored and the dull meet the flashy and extravagent.

From the brain to the chest and down into the stomach until we leave outside the digestive system of a building that is shaped like a sea horse.
Written by Page_Writer (Mad Girl)
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