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Coquette
La coquette, smoldering eyes
and movements that beckon,
on shapely legs and thighs,
sensuality without question.
Supple alabaster skin
intoxicatingly scented,
a dangerous combination
she knowingly created.
Coyness is her ultimate allure,
her plump pouty lips,
your attention captures
as does the sway of her hips.
She exudes sex provocatively,
beauty is not, the magnet,
she possesses this inadvertently
bewitching all who fall in her net.
The vision of her inflames the mind,
castigating all the senses,
halting all the moments in time,
as she passes by without pretenses.
In the end all you get is demure wink
a smile that stops you in your tracks
arresting your breath you don’t even blink
she walks away, waves and never looks back.
Gypsy Red
7/11/12
and movements that beckon,
on shapely legs and thighs,
sensuality without question.
Supple alabaster skin
intoxicatingly scented,
a dangerous combination
she knowingly created.
Coyness is her ultimate allure,
her plump pouty lips,
your attention captures
as does the sway of her hips.
She exudes sex provocatively,
beauty is not, the magnet,
she possesses this inadvertently
bewitching all who fall in her net.
The vision of her inflames the mind,
castigating all the senses,
halting all the moments in time,
as she passes by without pretenses.
In the end all you get is demure wink
a smile that stops you in your tracks
arresting your breath you don’t even blink
she walks away, waves and never looks back.
Gypsy Red
7/11/12
Published 11th Jul 2012
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11th Jul 2012 6:41pm
I love the picture you so effortlessly paint here of Coquette.
A great write Gypsy, much enjoyed. :)
A great write Gypsy, much enjoyed. :)
11th Jul 2012 6:59pm
11th Jul 2012 6:49pm
11th Jul 2012 7:00pm
Glad you liked it Mr. ken does kinda sorta remind ya of somebody... lololol Thanks!
Anonymous
11th Jul 2012 8:37pm
I really liked this poem Gypsy Red!
Very cute!!!
Strider :)
Very cute!!!
Strider :)
11th Jul 2012 9:07pm
Hahaha That's great strider so happy you enjoyed it, thanks for the great comment.
Anonymous
11th Jul 2012 8:59pm
Favorite lines:
The vision of her inflames the mind
castigating all the senses
halting all the moment in time
as she passes by without pretences.
Very nice read!
The vision of her inflames the mind
castigating all the senses
halting all the moment in time
as she passes by without pretences.
Very nice read!
11th Jul 2012 9:12pm
12th Jul 2012 7:50pm
very well executed rhyme. the catch with rhyme is that it needs to be subtle to work. well, you certainly accomplished that. normally i'm not a fan of rhyme, but this i thoroughly enjoyed. the first and the fifth stanzas stood out.
12th Jul 2012 8:27pm
3rd Mar 2013 2:58am
That was a Beautifully written piece Ms. Gypsy!!
I like the fun you have with your pen!!
Great job
Sir Lancelott
I like the fun you have with your pen!!
Great job
Sir Lancelott
3rd Mar 2013 7:01pm
Thank you so much Lance BTW nice pic. I appreciate the great comment, yes I am a notorious "coquette" even in my writing. :)
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