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My Best Friend's Girl
If arrogance is a wall,
consider her the cornerstone.
Pursed mouth,
raised brows,
painted with self-righteousness
and dripping patronizing smiles.
Hypocrisy embodied,
the girl is a child
and considers the world a toy.
consider her the cornerstone.
Pursed mouth,
raised brows,
painted with self-righteousness
and dripping patronizing smiles.
Hypocrisy embodied,
the girl is a child
and considers the world a toy.
Published 22nd Mar 2010
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Anonymous
22nd Mar 2010 10:55pm
well constructed, succint and definately conveys the intended message.
I very much enjoyed this one and its on my list.
Steven
I very much enjoyed this one and its on my list.
Steven
Anonymous
14th Apr 2011 3:13am
browsing through the 'Random Poems' section, and I like this a lot. Well constructed, and makes sense, even though the first and second part are disjointed in stanzas.
I'm not sure if you're still checking this (last time 200 and some odd days ago), but I'll put this here on the off-chance that you come back. :]
I'm not sure if you're still checking this (last time 200 and some odd days ago), but I'll put this here on the off-chance that you come back. :]
