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Unloved and Unwanted
Why am I tring to get you?
I am unwanted by you.
Why do I love you?
I am unloved by you.
You don't want me.
But I want you.
I feel it by everyone.
I am unloved and unwanted.
Story of my life.
Nothing.
That is what I am.
People say my name.
But some ask.
Who is that?
I am a nobody.
Unloved and Unwanted.
That is me.
Yep.
Me.
Never going to change.
I wish.
But it won't.
I know it.
No one understands me.
Why am I tring to get them to?
I don't know.
I just want to know what it feels like to fit in.
I have never known the feeling.
Unloved and Unwanted.
By everyone.
It is all I ask.
To be in the in crowd.
Where I have never been.
Maybe he would like me then.
Nah.
Probably.
It is all a dream.
Unloved and Unwanted.
I am unwanted by you.
Why do I love you?
I am unloved by you.
You don't want me.
But I want you.
I feel it by everyone.
I am unloved and unwanted.
Story of my life.
Nothing.
That is what I am.
People say my name.
But some ask.
Who is that?
I am a nobody.
Unloved and Unwanted.
That is me.
Yep.
Me.
Never going to change.
I wish.
But it won't.
I know it.
No one understands me.
Why am I tring to get them to?
I don't know.
I just want to know what it feels like to fit in.
I have never known the feeling.
Unloved and Unwanted.
By everyone.
It is all I ask.
To be in the in crowd.
Where I have never been.
Maybe he would like me then.
Nah.
Probably.
It is all a dream.
Unloved and Unwanted.
Published 18th Mar 2010
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19th Mar 2010 9:39am
I'd love and want you more. I understand this stream of thought may be personally heartfelt to you, but for me it seems like bleating, which of course is perfectly acceptable as a therapeutic exercise, although it doesn't always make for great poetry when there are no details as such. The most exciting part was counting all those full stops - more than enough for anyone to stumble over. Is this honestly your best work.
19th Mar 2010 4:30pm
well..it is how i am...this does happen 2 b one of my better poems...if u dont have anything nice 2 say...then dont say anything at all...this is my life right now...i am hating my life...i really like this guy...but he doesnt like me...my friends are pretty much leavin me..okay...keep ur comments to urself if they r mean...
19th Mar 2010 5:13pm
Mean doesn't come into to this. If you want your poetry to improve, which I imagine you do, otherwise you wouldn't have posted it to be commented on, then don't use all that superflous punctuation as it hinders the reader's flow. Also, try and include more description, because as things stand your reply is far more interesting than your poem. Finally, don't expect everyone to like what you write all the time - life is not like that.
