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Death Note
You said it was too late...
To change your own fate
You let yourself die
And left me alone to cry...
I never got to say goodbye
I never got to ask you why...
Every night, is a pointless fight
My head starts to ache, and my throat gets tight...
I try to cut, to ease the pain
Once, I even cut a vein...
The blood poured out, all thick and red
It stained the sheets of our bed...
I can not take it...I am breaking...
My legs are weak, and my hands are shaking...
I'm coming to join you wherever you are...
I really hope you are not far
To this world, I say goodbye...
It is now my turn to finally die...
To change your own fate
You let yourself die
And left me alone to cry...
I never got to say goodbye
I never got to ask you why...
Every night, is a pointless fight
My head starts to ache, and my throat gets tight...
I try to cut, to ease the pain
Once, I even cut a vein...
The blood poured out, all thick and red
It stained the sheets of our bed...
I can not take it...I am breaking...
My legs are weak, and my hands are shaking...
I'm coming to join you wherever you are...
I really hope you are not far
To this world, I say goodbye...
It is now my turn to finally die...
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1st Jul 2012 7:34am
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1st Jul 2012 6:28pm
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....... Excuse me? You're not gonna leave us right Dante? Please? You have yet to show me your guitar skills. Gone Forever, remember? :( Im talking to you. Right now.
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2nd Jul 2012 00:19am
I didn't feel like making different comments for each...so to fallenangelsweapon....trust me you won't miss me...just forget I ever existed...to Katana...thank you for the comment...to Bellababy...I'll leave a video for you...don't worry....when I make a promise I keep it...even to the grave...
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7th Jul 2012 6:21pm
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4th Sep 2012 2:39pm
i love the poem, but how about it just stay a poem cuz i dont want to lose you *hug*
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Anonymous
4th Apr 2013 1:34am
Don't ever leave me... Honestly, I may be a complete pain in the ass and may not deserve your friendship.. but don't leave. Please. You're one of my best friends.
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