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Erotic Is............
[i].........waking this morning with you on my mind
being pleasantly surprised that your warm, supple body is right here by my side
U R my fantasy.......
.......wrapped up in deliciously twisted sheets
remnants of a sultry night
in a place where 2 ceased to be
becoming one you see.......
Erotic is........
....artistry. I look at your body and see the shape
of things to cum.
I see spheres with soft edges
Smooth lines, rectangles and even polygons
forming.......you.
No formulas necessary, remember those "old s'kool" pop test?
I stamp my seal of approval upon your creation with my lips
You are absolutely the best........
Textures and contrast
Soft breast against my firm chest
hard nipples pushing against my flesh.
Heat radiating from within.......
.......laying next to you
skin to skin
"Lay your head on my pillow....."
Those long flowing locks of hair
tickling my neck
Soft,warm breath
from your mouth...it arouses
every nerve in my body to a heightened state
In your ear, I whisper......"baby, last night was great"
Erotic is
as erotic does.
Not all about the sex.......damn it never really was.
Could it be the kisses that never seemed to end
from midnight to dawn
our lips touched again and again
Our tongues have choreographed a twisted dance.....
.....perhaps that's what caused the [i]inclimate rise
in my pants......
...........before I lost them.
The morning light shines on us
once again it's time to rise and shine......
The love we made last night was sheer "floetry"
You drape that beautiful thigh across mine....
.....you are soft and "wet as rain" in between
Babygirl I realize that......
....laying here twisted up in each others "poetic love"
It doesn't matter if "that thing" just winds up in a strategic place or that the lioness roars, spreads her majestic wings and perches there upon my waiting face.....
......but to just look into each others eyes and say nothing at all.
Our bodies naturally start to move
Without a word, kissing and caressing - our bodies start to rise and fall
Just the fact that you and me...... "we" choose to "be"..........
Right here, no one else.....
...........nowhere else in the world
That's erotic.
being pleasantly surprised that your warm, supple body is right here by my side
U R my fantasy.......
.......wrapped up in deliciously twisted sheets
remnants of a sultry night
in a place where 2 ceased to be
becoming one you see.......
Erotic is........
....artistry. I look at your body and see the shape
of things to cum.
I see spheres with soft edges
Smooth lines, rectangles and even polygons
forming.......you.
No formulas necessary, remember those "old s'kool" pop test?
I stamp my seal of approval upon your creation with my lips
You are absolutely the best........
Textures and contrast
Soft breast against my firm chest
hard nipples pushing against my flesh.
Heat radiating from within.......
.......laying next to you
skin to skin
"Lay your head on my pillow....."
Those long flowing locks of hair
tickling my neck
Soft,warm breath
from your mouth...it arouses
every nerve in my body to a heightened state
In your ear, I whisper......"baby, last night was great"
Erotic is
as erotic does.
Not all about the sex.......damn it never really was.
Could it be the kisses that never seemed to end
from midnight to dawn
our lips touched again and again
Our tongues have choreographed a twisted dance.....
.....perhaps that's what caused the [i]inclimate rise
in my pants......
...........before I lost them.
The morning light shines on us
once again it's time to rise and shine......
The love we made last night was sheer "floetry"
You drape that beautiful thigh across mine....
.....you are soft and "wet as rain" in between
Babygirl I realize that......
....laying here twisted up in each others "poetic love"
It doesn't matter if "that thing" just winds up in a strategic place or that the lioness roars, spreads her majestic wings and perches there upon my waiting face.....
......but to just look into each others eyes and say nothing at all.
Our bodies naturally start to move
Without a word, kissing and caressing - our bodies start to rise and fall
Just the fact that you and me...... "we" choose to "be"..........
Right here, no one else.....
...........nowhere else in the world
That's erotic.
Published 29th Jun 2012
| Edited 20th May 2021
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Anonymous
29th Jun 2012 9:26pm
MrM,
Once again your 'floetry' is showing! Awesome erotic write is what it is. Go on and show 'em...too late you already did! Hope you find them pants. LOL!!!
Enjoyed Bro!
tornado
Once again your 'floetry' is showing! Awesome erotic write is what it is. Go on and show 'em...too late you already did! Hope you find them pants. LOL!!!
Enjoyed Bro!
tornado
29th Jun 2012 10:01pm
Some men spend a lifetime in an attempt to comprehend the complexities of women. Others pre-occupy themselves with somewhat simpler task.... and that is to arouse a woman's soul! :-) Well done!xo
30th Jun 2012 3:57am
Off the hook man! Even though you didn't use his song I can't help but think of Maxwell with this work!
Is "Lay your head on my pillow....." a reference to Tony Toni Tone? An older song also comes to mind.
Poems that have an "morning" after always appeal to me so thank you! I am sure there may be another musically reference but I can't id it.
Thanks for sharing.
Is "Lay your head on my pillow....." a reference to Tony Toni Tone? An older song also comes to mind.
Poems that have an "morning" after always appeal to me so thank you! I am sure there may be another musically reference but I can't id it.
Thanks for sharing.
Anonymous
30th Jun 2012 9:21pm
Whew!!! Not only a beautiful erotic poem, but a love story unfolded. I felt a peace in your heart. Felt the love and tenderness you both shared together. Wonderful!! :)
19th May 2021 3:45pm
