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In Black And White .....Finale
"There goes my shirt up over my head
.......oh my!
There goes my skirt dropping to my feet
.......oh my!
Some kinda' touch caressing my legs
.......oh my!
I'm turning red, who could this be?
.......oh my!"
I saw you babygirl, plain as day!
Hypnotized, what I saw with my eyes
Made me want to stay.......
.......right here.
So shy and demure by day.....
......never imagined that you got down that way.
Tender is a woman's touch....
.....touching herself is almost too damned much
for me to take in. I loosen my pants and grasp "that thing" real tight
I settle back into the dimming light....
.......strokin' it
and watching you.
Wishing it were *me* "gettin' it in" too!
Voyeuristically......
.......capturing those sensual images
you don't want *me* to see.
A quintessential, erotic delight
I try to stifle my groans....
.....as my ears hear you moan with pleasure
Body pressed against the mirror
making love to a beautiful stranger
moment by precious moment
sensually, measure by measure.
A sleek black cat, how you roll those hips
A slow nasty grind........your fingertips
start a revolution against your clit
Damn, I want to play with it. My, my, my....
.....your body's so ripped, you've got abs of steel
You squeeze your ass so tight-it's just damned unreal
Feeling the gentle flow.......
.....off to Atlantis you and I both go.
Your pussy is so damned, deliciously wet...
wet as rain, the stage is set
Your long delicate fingers disappear deeply inside
Bodies hot, we both take this nasty, carnal ride.....
........to Obsidian.
Separate destinations, yet arriving at the same climatic point
Fucking your hole, stroking my joint
Watching your muscles ripple, your body shakes and trembles
Creamy waters flowing down the insides of your thighs
Legs gaped open, damn baby your body is on fire!
........u are one sexy azz mutherfucker
and I'm just a sucker
for all of your *poetic* love.
Body pressed against the mirror
nipples growing bigger
Your finger's on the trigger.....
......pull it! Damn......right there it is.
Cummin' so hard baby, your eyes fill up with tears
Writhin' against the soft image in the mirror
Kissing her lips, the image getting clearer
that no one can love you like you love urself......
Wet,warm and satisfied I watch your body melt
to the floor in sweet release.
Mmmmmmmmm..........pulses of creamy white pleasure
fall upon the floor there at my feet.
Silently in the darkness, I scream out your name......
Feeling no disgrace......ain't no one to blame.
"I looked over to the left
Umm......I was looking so good I couldn't reject myself
I looked over to the left
Umm.......I was feeling so good I had to touch myself
I looked over to the left
Umm......I was eyein' my thighs butter pecan brown
I looked over to the left
Umm......comin outta my shirt and then the skirt came down..."
There goes my shirt up over my head........Oh my!
Published 28th Jun 2012
| Edited 29th Jun 2012
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Anonymous
28th Jun 2012 7:52pm
MrM.
Thnak you for taking us on this trip to Atlantis. A short trip for some, a little longer for others. Only one thing to say,
"Hail Atlantis!
Way down below the ocean where I wanna be she may be..."
Great write and nice finish!
tornado
Thnak you for taking us on this trip to Atlantis. A short trip for some, a little longer for others. Only one thing to say,
"Hail Atlantis!
Way down below the ocean where I wanna be she may be..."
Great write and nice finish!
tornado
28th Jun 2012 11:12pm
M.....you do what you do SO well...
we arent worthy.... I dub you "King"
of every good erotic thing!
this was fiyah baby!
we arent worthy.... I dub you "King"
of every good erotic thing!
this was fiyah baby!
29th Jun 2012 00:40am
29th Jun 2012 2:51am
There goes my shirt up over my head......oh my!! lol... ;-) This was so vividly HOT!!! I really love..."
Separate destinations, yet arriving at the same climatic point." That was such a sexy line! And of course I love the musical reference of TWEET! Thank you for sharing a wet and erotic read with us! I love this!....xoxo
Separate destinations, yet arriving at the same climatic point." That was such a sexy line! And of course I love the musical reference of TWEET! Thank you for sharing a wet and erotic read with us! I love this!....xoxo
29th Jun 2012 4:46am
29th Jun 2012 8:40am
I really love the flow of the words you wrote when i spoke them in my head it was hot. thanks
