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If it didn't hurt ; it never mattered.

When you throw your shit at me,
it's you with dirty hands;
It,s always better out than in,
but be careful where it lands.
 
Change position; aim it at the drain.
Thats where that odure belongs,
not in poems, prose or songs;
There's more to come out, no doubt,
it's clogging up your brain.
 
Cry baby cry; Red Dust will not buy.
Is it because you're worthless,
to clever by the half?;
they wanted to be educated and enthralled,
they couldn't help but be apalled,
You wanted to make them laugh.
 
Pick your audience carefuly;
don't leave them in a haze;
Dont be so grammatically pedantic,
it's only a parsing phase.
 
Row, row your boat,
gently down the stream;  
come back against the current,
other forms may be abhorant,
but try to keep it all afloat,
or destroy your dream.
 
Why deride a
               line break?
it's only a bit of
 fun
you like humour in a poem don't you?
 
                                   So here's another one.
 
I am not sure what they are meant to do either;  
 
                                         Oh my gaaaad I've come.
Written by leonardo
Published | Edited 27th Jun 2012
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