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The End
Night after night I look at the sky,
Thinking why everything is not right,
Night dark but your lies were darker,
Night cruel but what you did is more cruel,
Sing me to sleep,
Don't try to wake me,
Cause i don't want to live anymore,
Its too tiring so just let me go,
This time its really over,
Under night close,
Death rises to greet me,
Death Is The End,
Thinking why everything is not right,
Night dark but your lies were darker,
Night cruel but what you did is more cruel,
Sing me to sleep,
Don't try to wake me,
Cause i don't want to live anymore,
Its too tiring so just let me go,
This time its really over,
Under night close,
Death rises to greet me,
Death Is The End,
Published 24th Jun 2012
| Edited 25th Jun 2012
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24th Jun 2012 10:22pm
I really like the work the story is told and Idea is bold my only critic would be that you remove more in the line night cruel but what you did was more crueler would be better received if it was written night cruel but what you did crueler or more cruel ? either way its good I like your writing
