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Sweetness gone
All those words made of candy floss,
Unimaginable feelings.
All those words with hidden swords,
Ambiguous dealings.
All my vain and all world's pain
on a palm of your hand.
Your sweetness is sour, hungry for power,
I'm yours no more...
Unimaginable feelings.
All those words with hidden swords,
Ambiguous dealings.
All my vain and all world's pain
on a palm of your hand.
Your sweetness is sour, hungry for power,
I'm yours no more...
Published 12th Mar 2010
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Anonymous
12th Mar 2010 10:08pm
Sounds like you've loved and lost - but as us Celts say, its better to haved loved and lost than to have never loved at all.
I loved the last 2 lines.
Steven
I loved the last 2 lines.
Steven
12th Mar 2010 10:28pm
Anonymous
4th Jun 2012 4:18am
Sounds like one of my venting poems. Like it. :)
25th May 2013 1:43am
Short and simple, but ever so deep. It's a quick fall into the deepest recesses of the heart, but one can never land...
