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Sweetness gone

All those words made of candy floss,
Unimaginable feelings.
All those words with hidden swords,
Ambiguous dealings.
All my vain and all world's pain
on a palm of your hand.
Your sweetness is sour, hungry for power,
I'm yours no more...

Written by Syren

Published 12th Mar 2010

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Sour words of loss?

Anonymous

12th Mar 2010 10:08pm

Sounds like you've loved and lost - but as us Celts say, its better to haved loved and lost than to have never loved at all.

I loved the last 2 lines.

Steven