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which way is the direction
Why is mind at a wondering state, when I feel like left is right, right is wrong!Have I lost my direction to myself?Hmm???Which way is the direction?Mentally indecisive on just who lam ,what am I ,and what I like? Physically drain about being passionate about anything. Have I given up already?Which way is the direction? My friends feel like I'm depressed and have become a heavy drinker. I'm just simply lost ,I have given selfless to others and have donation my to the causes. In the fall of a eye lash, the good has turned to the bad; my eye sight has become distorted. Which way is the direction! How do you make the money not funny?How do you make a road paved in gold to stay smooth to find the wiz?I guess I'm going to be at this cross road till the end! Which way is the direction.
Published 14th Jun 2012
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15th Jun 2012 3:26pm
I like your poem and the sentiment it expresses. Just a suggestion: try (for a few minutes a few times a day) to be aware of your thoughts and feelings. Try not to be judgemental. You will begin to notice that they constantly change. Being in a "wondering state" is delightful. Your friends feeling you are "depressed and have become a heavy drinker" isn't. But at least you have wonderful friends who are honest about how they "feel." Please be gracious for that. And, by the way, watch your punctuation, spacing, etc. Misusing these only makes your poem harder to read. But you have a good, reflective, honest poem here.
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